People Thoughts and Feelings on My Shot by Shot List

I asked the same people as before to also comment on my synopsis. Their opinions were:-

Billy

At first it appears as if the girl is being stalked, making the audience believe something bad is about to happen to her, however there is a shift in tone as it is revealed the figure is actual the girls lover. The tone then shifts to action as the figure is attacked and begins to flee. Overall I like the concept and the constant shift of tones should work if executed correctly.

Amy

When I first started reading I got the sense of romance genre but when it got the part when she walked into the woods by herself, it felt creepier because you don’t know what is going to happen. Then when the groups show up I could see that there was going to be some action with weapons and fighting. I like how all these genres link together and I think that it will work.

Tracy

As I began reading the plot I thought it was going to be a story about secret lovers, but as the story continued I could sense a darker side to it.  The ideas are good as it brings together different genres and would appeal to both genders.

Neale

Action triggers action triggers pause. Confusion, mystery, darkness, fear follows and then tenderness and delight. It leads to a contrast, opposites attract and a contradiction in terms. More fear, a shout, a reaction and chase plus confusion. The speed of the narrative is what drives everything on pulling the viewer in to unconsciously consider both the story and the style …. and whatever happens next.

Matthew

The story begins with a sense of romance and action combined together, however it does defiantly have a creepy overlay effect to the whole thing.  The action begins to pick up when all the groups show up, all the genres mix up together.

Holly

It starts off with a sense of mystery and secrecy, the tension seems to build as it appears that the girl is being followed. When all of the groups show up that is when the action seems to actually begin.

Over time I will change and adapt the synopsis to improve it and link it with other aspects that I will create.